Sunday, October 30, 2011

Halloween

Ding-dong the clock struck midnight. It was finally Halloween...
I am Marybeth. I just moved into sunnyside last month. My favorite holiday is Halloween and I couldn't wait to go trick-or-treating. I didn't want to go to school but my mom made me. I decided to walk because I had extra time and want to think or what I want to do with all my candy. When I was walking I notice that no one else was outside. It was also oldly cold when I got to the school I was the only one there. But then I heard a swing and laughter comig from the playground.

When I got back there no one was anywhere to be found but just on swing was swinging. When I went up and started swinging there was a little girl that was on the slide that looked like she was crying so I hopped on the swing but once I got on the swing she disappeared. I decided to go home I was scared and started to get really cold. I thought I run and I was looking and got hit by a car so now I also haunt that playground every Halloween.

1 comment:

Mrs. Gibson said...

Capitalize proper nouns- Sunnyside

Watch your tenses.

Cute story!